tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30448825.post1086095568502475640..comments2024-02-19T23:06:59.149-06:00Comments on Scorpion Stalking Duck: Book Reviews and Bad Poetry Collidedadwithnoisykidshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07524886860399817926noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30448825.post-57486185062685849302010-07-25T17:32:04.306-05:002010-07-25T17:32:04.306-05:00Mr. Ilarsadin:
I stand corrected. I was actually...Mr. Ilarsadin:<br /><br />I stand corrected. I was actually TRYING to make a 3/5/3 haiku, and got carried away with words rather than syllables. Let the corrected haiku be:<br /><br /><br />I predict<br />each summary says<br />to cancel<br /><br />I am humbled to have not realized my haiku error. Thanks for your correction, and, as Basho would have said,<br /><br /><br />May the Grace of God<br />like the letters in your name<br />define who you aredadwithnoisykidshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07524886860399817926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30448825.post-67613135869981326662010-07-25T10:47:02.683-05:002010-07-25T10:47:02.683-05:00the third does not follow the haiku form of five s...the third does not follow the haiku form of five syllables / seven syllables / five syllables. So here you go:<br /><br />My primary guess<br /><br />of contents would be: cancel!<br /><br />Cancel! Oh, cancel!Arkanabar T'verrick Ilarsadinhttp://arkanabar.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30448825.post-44652412454921925272010-06-30T03:19:58.543-05:002010-06-30T03:19:58.543-05:00cancel! reschedule!! admit till medically relea...cancel! reschedule!! admit till medically released and stable!!!<br /><br />:-) love the Darcy haiku! too good.MightyMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02563721884001643857noreply@blogger.com